Sunday, March 19, 2023

Detections and Discursions: PD James' Devices and Desires (1989), Book the Last

"It's very satisfying to the human ego to discover the truth; ask Adam Dalgliesh.  It's even more satisfying to human vanity to imagine you can avenge the innocent, restore the past, vindicate the right.  But you can't. The dead stay dead."

"Life has always been unsatisfactory for most people for most of the time.  The world isn't designed for our satisfaction.  That's no reason for trying to pull it down about our ears."

"Can we ever break free of the devices and desires of our own hearts?"

--lines from Devices and Desires (1989), by PD James

With the Crime Queens of Golden and Silver Ages of Detection--Agatha Christie, Dorothy L. Sayers, Margery Allingham, Ngaio Marsh, PD James and Ruth Rendell are the most mentioned, although other names pop as well, most commonly Josephine Tey--article writers occasionally found the need to ask the question why these "nice British women" felt compelled to write about murder?  Perhaps the answer is that they weren't so nice!  Or, more accurately, perhaps there were darker undercurrents in their own lives which found outlets in the writing of crime fiction.  

I'm not sure how "nice" the British crime writing men were, either, but the question never seemed to get asked why men wrote of bloody murder.  Apparently in some quarters it just wasn't considered ladylike.  Some said the same thing about the nineteenth-century sensation novel, though plenteous proper Victorian misses wrote (and read) them.  

I don't know how many crime writers of the Golden Age necessarily were "nice," really.  One I feel sure of was pious Freeman Wills Crofts, although even he had an understanding, informed by his devout Christian faith, of the sin of greed.  "For the love of money is the root of all evil," runs the mantra of many a Crofts crime novel, "which, while some coveted after, they have erred from the faith, and pierced themselves through with many sorrows."

The true test of niceness, I suppose, is how it withstands the slings and arrows of those many sorrows. In other words, it is harder to be keep the milk of human kindness from curdling somewhat when one is miserably unhappy.  And certainly the Crime Queens all had travails to deal with in their lives.  Agatha Christie might have seemed to have  had the perfect Victorian/Edwardian upbringing, but then when the Great War commenced she married an extremely handsome man who a dozen years later with his marital unfaithfulness broke her heart and harmed her mind, leading to her infamous fugue episode, the brief disappearance which in England became a nine days' wonder (or was it ten).  Some have argued the ingenious mystery writer deliberately staged her own disappearance in a Gone Girlish act of revenge against her errant spouse.  

Margery Allingham married a handsome man, a childhood friend, who turned out to be a compulsive philanderer and is said to have been physically violent with her on occasion.  Dorothy L. Sayers fell desperately in love with free thinking Jewish writer John Cournos, who would not marry her, and, after having had an illegitimate child as a result of a rebound affair with a certain man in the motor trade (really), she instead wed yet another man who proved rather an inadequate substitute.  

A lot of people were surprised in later years to find that the increasingly girthful and androgynous-looking Sayers had ever married at all.  The chatty and indiscreet mystery writer Christianna Brand bluntly pronounced that upon meeting Sayers she had assumed the elder author was a "butch."  Ashamed of her social origins, Ngaio Marsh led a circumspect life of intense privacy (her second biographer argues that she was a closeted lesbian), as if she was afraid to deal with strong emotions.  Golden Age detective novels, as originally conceived, were well designed for such authors, who wanted to distance themselves from the all-too-real trauma of death and disordered emotions by making light of murder.  

But Sayers, who fictionalized some of her romantic travails with Cournos in her detective novel Strong Poison (1930) (the one which introduced her alter ego Harriet Vane), began preaching in the Thirties that death was not just the game that she and others had mirthfully played, and that crime fiction should reflect to some degree the emotions of real life.  Her detective novels Gaudy Night (1935) and Busman's Honeymoon (1937) were supposed to reflect this.  Both Allingham and Christie also wrote some detective novels that reflected realer, grimmer life more fully.  (Marsh not so much in my view.)  

So when PD James and Ruth Rendell began publishing putatively "realistic" English detective fiction in the 1960s, it was not as if they were treading entirely new ground.  Christie's non-series detective novel Ordeal by Innocence (1958), actually written around the same time as James' debut novel Cover Her Face, might actually be a James or Rendell novel, arguably, in terms of its darker subject matter.  Allingham's Hide My Eyes, from the same year, paints a compelling, frightening picture of the consequences of sticking one's head in the sand rather than facing up to unpleasant truths.  

I think the early Crime Queens, just like the later ones, did sometimes draw on darker events in their own lives when writing their crime fiction.    Certainly there is no question that PD James did.  

PD James looks out over the sea

Born in 1920, at the very dawn of the Golden Age of detective fiction, James was the product of an unhappy marriage, and her troubled mother was institutionalized when James was but a teenager.  Despite being an obviously brilliant person, James had to leave school at age sixteen and take on work.  Then she married just five years later, five days past her 21st birthday, to a man who would return from the war mentally damaged and himself would be institutionalized, like James' mother.  (Before this the couple had two daughters together.) He would spend the next two decades in and out of institutions, dying by his own hand in 1964.

Having two young children to care for, James entered the civil service bureaucracy after World War Two and achieved considerable distinction in this field.  She did not start writing her first detective novel until the late 1950s, when she was nearly forty, telling herself that it was now or never.  It is no wonder that as a teenager she was drawn to reading detective fiction, including her idol Dorothy L. Sayers, as a form of escape, nor is it a surprise that she was fascinated with death.  Instead of distancing herself from the disturbance of death in her fiction, however, she embraced it.  She also put a lot of herself, I am convinced, into her primary series detective, Adam Dagliesh, as well as other characters.  

I've read all but the last couple of PD James mysteries (I've started the penultimate one, The Private Patient, twice but have never finished it--not because it was bad, but just because other things came up), and there are definite common qualities to her books, reflective of the author.  Let's list some:

The primary characters tend to be unhappy high level bureaucrats or other professionals, reflecting James' own personal background.  They have replaced the landed gentry of the Golden Age.  James thought her books much more representative of British society than GA detective novels, but were they, really?  Her professionals typically are improbably eloquent, speechifying in long, perfectly composed paragraphs, and quite snobbish and intellectually arrogant.  Honestly, Agatha Christie, even with her gentry types and condescension to servants, still comes off as more of an "everywoman" than James, in terms of her portrayal of characters, especially her village types.  Interestingly, James could do "village types" quite  well, when she chose to do so.  Perhaps she shied away from the Christie comparison.  

Religious themes are prominent, especially in the later books.  There will be at least one traditionalist Anglican type character, whose faith may be lost or weakening, but who nevertheless stoically goes through the forms of faith in order to escape from falling into the bottomless pit of sheer nihilism.  There's a British stiff upper lipness to it all.  I think this was very close to James' own religious view.

Left Wing radicals are pretty much objectionable nuisances and nutcases who hector inoffensive traditionalists (like James) with their toxic mantras of "political correctness," today known as "wokeness."  This is in the books from the Eighties onward and it's very similar to the Golden Age stereotype of the Leftists of that day.  

Her "better" people are intensely private, despising the conscious airing of emotions and often disdaining even physical contact with others.  Certainly Dalgliesh is like this.  Stiff upper lip again!  I have a lot easier time imagining Lord Peter Wimsey having sex than Adam Dalgiesh.

People's worth can be identified by the interior decoration of their homes.  A worthwhile person will have lots of books and some art, preferably original work by a known artist, in their homes, usually hanging over--to use James' favorite word--"elegant" (preferably Adam) mantelpieces.  They will grind coffee beans to make coffee and never dare have instant in the house.  They will make fresh squeezed orange juice.  Women will frequently bake their own bread.  They listen to classical  music and hate rock., or pop as they call it.  Regrettably, none of these activities will actually make them happy, but still it signifies their worth as human beings.

Middle class people in trade are often looked down upon for their lack of intellectual worth, just like in many GA detective novels, although more humble country people, especially parsons, tend to be admired.  Charwomen, aka cleaners, are quirky and colorful and comic relief, just like in the Golden Age.  

Acne, or spots as the English say, is/are the stigmata of a weak character.

Near the end of the novel someone will confront the killer with the truth and the two of them will then sit down for a nice, eloquent philosophical discussion about the ethics of murder.  Earlier in the novel several characters will pompously debate some current issue, like abortion or nuclear power or church reform.

James' favorite word is "elegant," while she also loves the words egregious (as in egregiously presumptive), atavistic/atavism, carapace and exophthalmic (i.e., bulging eyes).  People in her books "go to bed" with each other or they "make love," but they never "have sex" or, God forbid, "screw" or "fuck."  Fucking is for the masses, apparently.

Adults drink Ovaltine, cocoa or some milky non-caffeinated drink before going to bed (really going to bed, not having sex).  In one book even though it's 1988 a detective inspector still takes this as a given.  

James will never split an infinitive!

Despite James' insistence that her work was much more "credible" and less snobbish than GA detective fiction, I think that there actually are quite a few similarities between her writing and that of the Golden Age generation, as much of the above indicates.  This is one of the things I want to look at in my review of James eighth Adam Dalgliesh detective novel, Devices and Desires (1989), which I will now finally commence below, after this Jamesian introductory discursion.

PD James and Adam Dalgliesh (actor Roy Marsden)

In this novel Dalgliesh takes leave from Scotland Yard and goes to rural Norfolk to tend to the estate of his recently deceased spinster aunt, Jane Dalgliesh, who appeared earlier as a murder suspect in the third novel in the series, Unnatural Causes (1967).  I like this sort of connectivity in mystery series, even if it feels a bit off here, when you think about it.  

Jane Dalgliesh lived on the Suffolk coast in Causes, but we are told she moved to Norfolk five years previous to the events in D&D, after inheriting a converted windmill.  We later find that she had a fiance who died in the Great War, which surely would make Jane in her late eighties when she died.  (The novel is explicitly set in 1988.)  So when she moved to live alone in a rural norfolk windmill, she was, what, 83?  Hardy lady!  Of course the Dalglieshes do so very much value their privacy.  James herself lived to 94 and remained pretty independent, evidently, to the end.  She passed away in her sleep, an easier quietus than her friend Ruth Rendell, a stroke victim, had sadly to bear not long afterward.  

Anyway, it just so happens that there is a serial killer, nicknamed The Whistler, who is active in the very same area!  The novel opens with the foul fiend committing his fourth fatal strangling of a woman.  It's a very effectively drawn sequence and shows that James could have written an excellent serial killer thriller, had she chosen to do so.  But she did not: Rest assured, traditionalists, that this is a traditional detective novel (though see below about the regrettable thriller subplot of another sort).  

James limns her setting quite evocatively, I must allow.  As usual with James, buildings are important.  Here we have an old Victorian rectory (the church is serviced has been pulled down), a ruined Benedictine monastery, Dalgliesh's windmill (he was sole heir to his aunt's ample fortune, lucky sod) and, more incongruously, a nuclear power plant! The main characters in the novel are, aside from AD:

PD James hits the top of the pops.

Terry Rickards, local Detective Inspector, a decent man who respects Adam Dalgliesh but resents how AD dressed him down a dozen years ago when he was in the Yard.  Currently Rickards is stressed because his pregnant wife Susie has gone home to be with his meddlesome mother,-in-law on account of the depredations of The Whistler.

Rickards' detective sergeant, Stuart Oliphant, who is rather a nasty bully.  

Alex Mair, head honcho at the nuclear power plant.

Alex's sister, Alice Mair, a noted cookbook author.  She and AD, who has recently published a new book of poetry, have the same publisher as James, Faber & Faber!

Meg Dennison, a forcibly retired, widowed schoolteacher from London who came to this corner of Norfolk to served as housekeeper for the elderly Copleys, a retired Anglican minister and his wife.  

Neil Pascoe, a graduate student on a grant who rather than working on his dissertation or what have you, has formed a local anti nuclear power group, People Against Nuclear Power, or PANUP, and thrown himself wholesale into left wing activism.  

Amy Camm, a mother with an illegitimate baby named Timmy who is living with Neil, though the two are not having, and have never had, sexual relations.  Just what is Amy up to?

Ryan Blaney, an artist with four children, the eldest of whom is fifteen-year-old Theresa, whose wife has recently died.  Since her mother's sad demise Theresa, like James after her mother was institutionalized, has been having to take care of her siblings.

Hilary Robarts, an official at the nuclear power station and, well, there's no other way to put it, an absolute bitch.  She's also Alex's lover, or mistress as everyone calls her, though Alex has tired of her.

Caroline Amphlett, Alex's beautiful, highly competent and completely impersonal personal assistant.

Jonathan Reeves, Caroline's inadequate, spotty boyfriend, who also works at the power plant.

The late Toby Gledhill, a beautiful, brilliant young nuclear scientist at the power station who deliberately took a header there to his untimely death.  Why?  

converted East Anglian windmill
So, do you have all that?  Of course hateful Hilary is the novel's main murderee and she spends the first 200 pages of the novel needlessly provoking a bunch of people to want to kill her, in the manner of her kind. There's the Blaneys, whom Hilary is threatening to throw out of their cottage, which she owns; Neil Pascoe and Amy Camm, on account of Hilary threatening to sue Neil for libel; Alex, because Hilary is demanding that he marry and give her a child (he made her abort the last one, she claims); Alice, because she is very close to her brother, with whom she lives (he stopped her father from sexually abusing her, for good and all).  And there may well be others too.  What about Tony Gledhill's suicide, for example?

It takes about 200 pages actually to get to Hilary's murder.  Many a detective novel would have begun and ended by then, but PD James has lots of backstory to get through.  There is also the matter of The Whistler, who kills a fifth woman before finally killing himself, not long before the slaying of Hilary, in the very same manner as The Whistler's victims!  

Yes, it seems that someone with a private agenda killed Hilary and tried to make it look like it was really  The Whistler.  This limits the list of suspects, seemingly, to people who attended a dinner party at the Mairs where The Whistler's MO was revealed.  (He stuffed his victims' public hair into their mouths and carved an "L" on each dead woman's forehead.)  These were the Mairs (Alice did the cooking), Meg Dennison and Miles Lessingham, along with Theresa Blaney, who assisted with the cooking.  The late Hilary was there as well, along with the great AD himself.  AD even discovers the body.  Hey, James had to give him something to do in the book, since he's not leading the investigation this time!

So from one perspective all the serial killer stuff is a colossal waste of time (we are even told his mother was to blame for the murders, which could not get more trite), but on the other hand it's a pretty neat way of limiting the circle of suspects.  But does it???

Up till this point I was pretty engaged with the story, which does have beautifully written passages, but then James unleashes this thrillerish whale of a red herring, as it were, concerning the nature of which I will say nothing though I really want to, which to me just felt like a massive waste of time. This takes up much of the novel's Books V and VI and I honestly would have preferred to have it excised.  This sort of action material, more suited to crime thrillers in my view, crops up frequently in James' later novels.  It's like she wrote them with one eye toward their inevitable television adaptations for the Dalgliesh detective series.  

Still there's one of those classic James confrontations between the murderer and the person who knows the truth, as well as a bittersweet ending which lingers in my mind.  James may insist that only in the Golden Age mysteries is order restored, but D&D's finis is pretty optimistic by James' standards, especially compared with her previous novel, A Taste for Death.  The mystery plot of D&D is far from ingenious, to my mind, but I probably would rate the novel pretty highly were it not for the implausible thrillerish subplot.  Also, aspects of the solution are not really fairly clued in my view.

D&D seems, like many of James' novels (perhaps all of them), to be about the struggle of rational human beings to get by in a fallen and increasingly faithless world.  Intelligent beings may rationalize the outrageous act of murder, but in fact it's the gravest of sins in James' eyes and in those of her fictional avatars.  There is a deep moral sense to James' work, a quality she shared with Agatha Christie, though James never gave Christie credit for this.  It lends a measure of gravitas and power to her work.

Even though James' surrogates, like Dalgliesh, often evince a distaste for humanity on a physical level they recognize the basic right to life with which each of us is instilled presumably, in James' eyes, by the Creator  Witnessing the sniveling of Neil Pascoe, AD thinks censoriously "how unattractive it was, the self-absorption of the deeply unhappy."  He reflects how he himself is "good with the words"--he is a published and lauded poet, after all--but "[w]hat he found difficult was what came so spontaneously to the truly generous at heart: the willingness to touch and be touched."  No less an entity than Jesus, we should remember, washed other people's feet.

But AD values his privacy so highly.  Late in her life James discounted the notion that anyone would dare write a biography of her.  How egregiously presumptuous an invasion of her privacy that would have been!  And nearly a decade after her death no one yet has.  Her own autobiographical fragment, Time to be in Earnest, seems to conceal as much as it reveals.

Up in his aunt's windmill (now his), AD actually incinerates Great War era photos of his aunt and her soldier fiance, who tragically did not survive the conflict.  AD thinks of his gazing at these old mementos of the dead past as "a voyeurism which in [his aunt's] life would have been repugnant to them both."  Why?  This does seem to me to represent a hypersensitive desire for privacy.  Had I been Dalgliesh I would have saved those photos for posterity.  No man is an island!

Having with Faber & Faber just published a new book of poems, A Case to Answer, to great critical acclaim and sales success (he's not just a poet, but a remunerative one!), Dalgliesh himself thinks wonderingly how "solitude was essential to him.  He couldn't tolerate twenty-four hours in which the greater part wasn't spent entirely alone.  But some change in himself, the inexorable years, success, the return of his poetry, perhaps the tentative beginnings of love, seemed to be making him sociable."  James herself was achieving great success at this time, of course, and had become fast friends with Ruth Rendell--it was probably one of her greatest friendships in a life that seems to have been for decades singularly devoid of real intimacy.

Gal Pals
PD James and Ruth Rendell around the time of the publication of Devices and Desires

Another James stand-in, the conservative churchgoing widow Meg Dennison, prizes her friendship with Alice Mair and tries to keep to her Christian faith, even though her sufferings have suffused her with doubts.  As a teacher in London she lost her post when she outraged racial militants by referring to the the "blackboard" as such, rather than calling it a "chalkboard," and by refusing to take a racial sensitivity course.  Did anything like this every really happen?  Poor Alice, a victim of PC culture!  What would James have said about "wokeness"?  

Of her salving friendship with Alice Mair, Meg thinks gratefully of "the comfort of a close, undemanding, asexual companionship with another woman."  After her schoolteacher husband's tragic death while saving a student from drowning, "she had walked in darkness like an automaton through a deep and narrow canyon of grief in which all her energies, all her physical strength, had been husbanded to get through each day....Even her Christianity was of little help.  she didn't reject it, but it had become irrelevant, its comfort only a candle which served fitfully to illume the dark."  

It is hard not to see such a character as something of a self-portrait, except that James, rather than modestly retire to housekeep obscurely in Norfolk, remained in London and became one of England's best-selling novelists.  Alice Mair is something of a self-portrait too, I suspect, capturing other aspects of James' own self.  "She's a successful professional writer," Dalgleish huffily tells Rickards when he suggests that Alice--a spinster living with her brother who "had no other outlet for her emotions"--might have killed Alex's mistress Hilary out of overmastering jealousy.  "I imagine that success provides its own form of emotional fulfillment, assuming she needs it."  Indeed!  I imagine I would find writing #1 bestselling novels quite fulfilling myself.  

When Meg tells of her husband's death to the unsentimental and atheistic Alice Mair,  the latter tartly responds: "It would be perfectly natural to hope that your husband hadn't died for someone second-rate."  Meg regretfully admits that the boy wasn't even that, but rather "a bully and rather stupid....He was spotty, too."  Then she quickly adds: "oh dear, that wasn't his fault, I don't why I even mentioned it."  Indeed, Meg: you really should know that spots are not an index of character.

But then throughout the James books acne seems to afflict the weak and (mostly) worthless.  Poor pallid, spotty Jonathan Reeves, dominated by his beautiful, confident girlfriend Caroline, comes of banal middle class trade origins (his father is a carpet salesman)--naturally the family is Chapel!  Jonathan wretchedly thinks to himself: "We can't be as ordinary, as dull as we seem."  But they are, sadly.  Hoity-toity Alex Mair sneeringly dismissed Jonathan as "an acned nonentity."  He simply can't imagine why Caroline is wasting her time on him.

People are their environments in James books, seemingly, so that a dully furnished house signifies dully souled people.  The Reeves family, Caroline and Hilary herself damningly all live in uninterestingly decorated homes, in contrast with Jane Dalgliesh's fascinating windmill, where AD has taken up abode for a time.  Poor bourgeois DI Rickards, a former Dalgleish acolyte, can't help enviously contrasting his own banally furnished home (courtesy of Susie, who won school medals for "neatness and needlework") with that damn windmill: "Dalgliesh's furniture was old, polished by centuries of use...the paintings were real oils, genuine water-colours...."

Move on, nothing erotic to see here!

Up in the windmill, Dalgliesh, filled with "gentle melancholy," listens to Edward Elgar's great cello concerto, thinking how its "plaintive notes" evoke "those long, hot Edwardian summers...the peace, the certainty, the optimism of the England into which his aunt had been born."  This is not what I get out of Elgar's cello concerto (I think of the tragic, atrocious carnage of the First World War that Edwardian pride and pomposity led Europe into); but then I like, and grew up on, Eighties rock music.  

Contrarily, when Dalgliesh turns on the tube he is utterly disgusted by a "jerking pop star...wielding his guitar...his parodic gyrations so grotesque that it was difficult to to see that even the besotted young could find them erotic."  

Take that, Morrissey!  James was old enough to be my grandmother and obviously did not want her MTV, thank you, which helps explain why her characters under thirty usually aren't that convincing.

When I read James' crime fiction, I am fascinated by what I see revealed of her own personality, her intrinsic being.  I think that her Christian faith blessedly saved her from falling into outer darkness after her myriad personal sufferings, but that, she, like many of us, had a "darker side," as it were, which she used her writing to explore.  No Patricia Highsmith was she, surely, for she was not a sociopathic type and she did not in the end identify with murderers; but possibly there was some sense of sinister sisterhood under their skins.  James understood the fatal temptation to murder.  Perhaps this is why her work veers so often toward gloom.

It's a shame in a way, because there is a lot of evidence that James had a warm and winning aspect to her personality: charm, a sense of humor, kindness, love even.  She allows some of this sunlight to filter into Devices and Desires in a long, ingratiating chapter in which Rickards and Sergeant Oliphant interview the middle class, middle aged couple who runs the local pub, George and Doris Jago.  They are refreshingly normal, happy, uncomplicated people--Christiesque village people--and it's such a relief to be in their company for a spell and away from all those the haughty, well-educated yet miserable white-collar, Oxbridge professionals.  

I have no doubt in my mind PD James could have been a true successor to Agatha Christie, had her life experiences inclined her in that direction.  But James was also responding to the temper of the time; and what many people then wanted were sprawling, nearly 200,000 word mysteries filled with morose murder melodrama.  Devices and Desires was a #1 bestseller in the United States, one week topping Dean Koontz, Thomas Pynchon, Jack Higgins, Tom Clancy, Danielle Steel and Gore Vidal (see pic above right).  This is all well and good, but it my view James had done it better two decades earlier in Shroud for a Nightingale, with something like half the wordage.


  1. " Ashamed of her social origins, Ngaio Marsh led a circumspect life of intense privacy ..." no hint of this in her autobiography, or if there was I was too dim to pick up on it.

    1. I wasn't referring to her autobiography. Marsh invented a much more exciting bio for herself than her bourgeois one and loved her aristocratic connections. Maybe "ashamed" is too strong a word though. Unsatisfied?

  2. You have some wonderful insights into Devices and Desires and PD James. I found your review because that book in particular gave me some ideas I had about her and the book. Just like a novel she wrote about her female detective the travels to an island, I thought she did let the real murderer go free (am I remembering that wrong?)and made me wonder if it was a pattern. And if I was right than it indicated a psychology of a writer who bares a secret guilt she wants to keep buried. I think that she was going to name in the end that Alex Mair was the Whistler. That his cleaning things up before his appointment was closing out the Whistler by pointing to what the police expected to find. That the woman he killed had rejected him in some way, and his vanity and abandonment issues triggered his need to label them lesbians with an L and female public hair stuffed in their mouths. That it wasn't just him protecting his sister from a sexually abusive father but himself also who had been preyed upon...I believe he was younger than his sister. That his dalliance with multiple women was his making up for the shame he felt from the abuse and the women's rejection triggered his rage when his charm had no manipulative effect and they saw him for what he was...a shallow arrogant man incapable of real relationships. As for James...if I am right about the above, I thought working for the Home office, which honestly I don't know much about, might have led her to be part of knowing of justified deaths and could lead to a sense of guilt...but that is just one of many possibilities of a heavy and toxic sense of guilt she seems to portray in her books. For what it's worth, my theories are born out from the psychology of the characters, events, and writers thoughts, not any personal viewpoint. I actually like being a political and Christian conservative, and an amatuer detective fiction solver. Noone in the book questioned the possibility that the suicide was actually a murder to cover up the real murderers tracks and I found that odd. It certainly was plausible. Alex could have even planned to kill Hillary and pretend it was a copy cat, or had been in conspiracy with Alice or found out his sister beat him to it. His alibi was being at the plant, so perhaps that was planned. Perhaps there was an underground escape route from the nuclear plant as Alex joked about a tunnel under the fence. Perhaps James was encouraged to change that ending due to state security concerns on reviewing her book and she complied. Structurally, it seems like the Whistler needed to wrap up the end of the book, but with the title being Devises and Desires, that implies a different focus than the Whistler. James put so much ink into the Alex Mair character as what point THAT much ink? Certainly not to emphasize his sister's murderous act over the multiple deaths of the Whistler. You can't tell the story of Alex and Alice without pointing to the murder of Hillary. I felt like Alex tied all the characters together, yet the point of the story wasn't about the appointment of a government official wa it. That was a secondary story.

  3. (Continued)....
    I think making Alex the Whistler makes his sister's story much more powerful, and she's really what the story is about. James intimate knowledge of mental health issues seems to show contradiction in the tramp, who was a setup with the shoes, and the alleged Whistler who may also have been setup, but all the police and community assume this guy with obvious mental health issues automatically assume is guilty...directly opposite of what Adam does when he deals with the tramp. How can Adam be assuming guilt with the one who couldn't defend himself and be unassuming with the one who could? It's not consistent. I think Alex's personality could explain the almost impulsive killings of the Whisler with the careful planning of killing the Whistler, though that would be odd for most killers. Both are motivated by arrogance though. The careful planning existed because it involved protecting his career, not protecting his manhoods ego as the Whistler. But...Alex would not be able to end impulsive killings in London, I wouldn't think...although the Golden Gate killer seemed to in real life. It seems unlikely.

  4. Alice herself went out of her way to tell Meg she did it alone, obviously to protect her brother, but could that indicate he was actually involved in Hillary's death? Was the Whisler story's only purpose after so much ink just to setup the point that Alice didn't know the Whisler was dead? Seems overkill, no pun intended. Also, the Whisler killings may have been made to look impulsive instead of carefully targeted and planned (the out of town woman having some previous contact with the transplanted Alex). Alex's divorce, a form of rejection could have been his trigger...not murdering any since his father, but remembering the finality of abandoning the abandoned with that death. James short blurb about the alleged Whistler is so brief and fails to fully explain the motives of rage, why the Sunday School tune, why the mutilation. Her explanation seemed cryptic and stereotyping and way to brief for the sustained anxiety created by the existence of the unknown killer. The story felt like it had a shortened ending in some ways to me.

  5. Sorry for the late response. I think your solution is better than James! Thank you.